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  • Re: Visiting the Real Sonnet

    I think ''the Ranch'' deserves a second look.Its body lacks the clothing of a rhyme;Its grammar scheme will fit in no one's book;Yet follow it, and all is clear in time.There's nothing used that really shouldn't be(Unless the breaking of some rules's a ''prob'');You ought not be a dog and ''Ranch'' a tree;For Pinsky's Picks, this one's a decent ...
    Posted to Poems by White_Rabbit on July 16, 2008

  • Re: ♫ "Oh, I'm Tangled Up In Blue" ♫

    ...and that much, certainly, was intentional! The lack of relationship between ''Blues'' and your sonnet, that is. Either this week's poem is totally confusing or I am totally confused (or both), so I shall jump off this train now whether it's stopped or not. wr ()()
    Posted to Poems by White_Rabbit on June 11, 2008

  • Re: ♫ "Oh, I'm Tangled Up In Blue" ♫

    I am grateful for your kindnessand though hate to disagree;if I made sense of the poemit was unintentionally! And of course you're right. In 20/20 hindsight I see that I read your perfectly sensible narrative into a poem that had nothing to do with what your sonnet said (unless you meant to imply that the poem was a disaster)...and that much, ...
    Posted to Poems by White_Rabbit on June 11, 2008

  • Pretty much what you did with it...

    ...which is virtually nothing. :) On second thought, you did a lot with it...or rather to it. Judgment on the world juxtaposed with judgment on a poem: this may set a new local record for ''damning with faint praise''. Check out my parody of ''Blues'' and let me know what you think of it. wr ()()
    Posted to Poems by White_Rabbit on June 11, 2008