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Re: Another Pepsi challenge
MaryAnn: We've faced such Self-Important Poems and their Self-Important Authors all too often here on Poems Fray, much more so in the past than currently, but all too frequently when Mr. Pinsky has put up. Rabbit, a few weeks ago when Robert Pinsky presented his monthly classic poem, he was available to all posters for, I think, four whole ...
Posted to Poems by White_Rabbit on July 23, 2009
Re: "the part of me that wasn't breathing."
But if so, shouldn't that be ''the part of me that hadn't been breathing''? wr ()()
Posted to Poems by White_Rabbit on July 22, 2009
A kosher Chinese restaurant...?
What, no reaction to my HOTR parody, even from you? (Maybe that art form has played out around here.) I would love to find a kosher Chinese restaurant (or at least one that matched the biblical dietary laws of clean and unclean, holy and common: not precisely the same thing). I'd take up the culinary arts just so I could open and run one. wr ...
Posted to Poems by White_Rabbit on July 21, 2009
So do I...
I'm getting a little surprised at the reactions to this poem. There's nothing commonplace or ''prosy'' about it. It is narrative poetry. wr ()()
Posted to Poems by White_Rabbit on July 21, 2009
Re: "The Most Careless Girl in the Class . ." By Erica Ehrenberg
WOW. I like this poem!!!! I like it more than any Tuesday Poem I can remember in a long time. More in my Front Post to come...
Posted to Poems by White_Rabbit on July 21, 2009
Re: "The Fate of Pleasure" by Peg Boyers
There's nothing quite like a poet with an axe to grind, is there? I love it when you really focus yourself on giving serious reviews. Keep it up. The temptation is ENORMOUS to put ''The Fate of Pleasure'' through the grist mill of a ''Home on the Range'' parody. It would be a tremendous pleasure, and perhaps it would be the fate it deserves. ...
Posted to Poems by White_Rabbit on June 23, 2009
Re: And how would you classify Gluck herself ?
denny: My ''guess'' would be INFJ - with the emphasis on the J. As an INFJ, your primary mode of living is focused internally, where you take things in primarily via intuition. They place great importance on havings things orderly and systematic in their outer world. They hold a special place in the heart of people who they are close to, who ...
Posted to Poems by White_Rabbit on June 15, 2009
Re: The "adaptive personality"
denny: I find much to like in the chameon Lothario in ''Cafe'' - definitiely an ENFP with the emphsis on the F. Yet, I am also troubled by the idea - When they meet him now, he's a cipher—the person they knew didn't exist anymore.He came into existence when they met, he vanished when it ended, when he walked away.We can grow significantly by ...
Posted to Poems by White_Rabbit on June 12, 2009
Re: Another thought for you Wabbit ()()
I am pretty sure that the protagonist would be seen much more readily as the fool that he is. And the poem would've become very interesting, rather like a train wreck is interesting. :) I have to admit that these are my favorite lines: After a few years, they get over him.They tell their new boyfriends how amazing it was, like living with ...
Posted to Poems by White_Rabbit on June 12, 2009
My turn (from my front-page review)...
I suppose I could argue that form(Were it stricter: some classical norm)Would improve this as such...But (no doubt) it's too muchTo expect those near death to conform. wr ()()
Posted to Poems by White_Rabbit on June 2, 2009

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