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  • Re: denny with a "d"

    I LIKE that poem, denny. I really think you should focus on original poetry revolving around such themes. If (as Sir Arthur Eddington said) ''the Universe is not only queerer than we imagine, it's queerer than we can imagine,'' then surely there is a place for your slightly askew perspective in trying to imagine it poetically. And this is surely ...
    Posted to Poems by White_Rabbit on July 24, 2009
  • Walking tightropes is my specialty, cherie...

    ...which is preferable to my getting angry at someone like I sometimes used to, believe me. Yes, I saw that response you wrote elsewhere. But C/t, didn't MaryAnn just ask NoStar ''why didn't you tell me writing limericks was so easy?'' (It really isn't, but she'll catch on.) That doesn't sound to me like someone who can't and won't write poems at ...
    Posted to Poems by White_Rabbit on July 15, 2009
  • But C/t., it was a START...

    ...and maybe that's what's important? NoStar's recent chain limericks were the best I've ever seen from him, and considering what he's done heretofore, that's really saying something. But for whatever reason, MaryAnn is still new at writing poetry of any kind, and her way of thinking seems more geared toward a particular kind of analysis. With ...
    Posted to Poems by White_Rabbit on July 15, 2009
  • Re: "Number 2" - Critical Comments Welcome

    Hi Ted, As I've just pointed out, Denny is drawing upon his personality type and the common parlance by which particular cognitive processes within it express themselves. I know that Denny will read this too, so speaking as one who regards you both well, let me put it this way. When someone gets caught up in a belief in his own uniqueness -- and ...
    Posted to Poems by White_Rabbit on July 12, 2009
  • Re: "Number 2" - Critical Comments Welcome

    denny: OK - I have managed to convince myself that, with the help of Ted, that this poem needs to go in a different direction - maybe employ the concepts and ''jargon'' of ''Number Theory'' buried within the text itself. Number 2 “When One made love to Zero, spheres embraced their arches and prime numbers caught their breath''Raymond ...
    Posted to Poems by White_Rabbit on July 12, 2009