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  • Re: These One-Word Titles Are Hard to Pun (A Sonnet)

    Now you've done it...now I'm wondering how Foobs will react to all of this. :) By the way, Mr. Breslin, Foobs is at his absolute best when the Tuesday Poem is at its absolute worst. And I (the Other Surviving Infamous Parodist of the Fray, since NoStar shows up so seldom) don't have the heart to skewer ''Siren'' ... because, after all, it wails ...
    Posted to Poems by White_Rabbit on July 25, 2008

  • P.S.: See my other P.S. below...

    ...I'd forgotten just how double-minded my reviews sometimes are (more positive in one thread, more negative in another). wr ()()
    Posted to Poems by White_Rabbit on July 24, 2008

  • I've missed Mr. Breslin too...

    Amen to the lot, NoStar. Plus: NoStar:Your civil acknowledgment of White Rabbit's criticism is an example for all who feel the lash of a bad review. You and Mr. Breslin ''ain't seen nuthin' yet'' if you think that was a bad review. If it were a bad review, then I would've set the text to ''Home on the Range'' and stampeded the thing off the ...
    Posted to Poems by White_Rabbit on July 24, 2008

  • Mr. Breslin, I will never be able to thank you enough.

    Several years back, you helped me as I wrote my first pantoum ''Dish It Up'' as an exercise in public revising. Your help and encouragement gave me a stonger confidence in my writing ability. I have missed your presence on the Poem fray. Others may criticize your individual works, but your worth here as a poet and especially as a teacher is ...
    Posted to Poems by NoStar on July 23, 2008