Re: Hard-wired inequality?
by
wmccomninel
11/24/2007, 9:42 PM #
I have read all of the posts linked to this article and only yours makes an honest attempt to start with premises and then to reason from there. I am no scholar but find that while you make an OK start there is much not covered by your premises.
Particularly the question of the ability to shift the costs of 'externalities' upon others and how together with barriers to entry, cartels and just plain corruption the outcomes are skewed to favor the rich.
Beware those who will rewrite your thesis for you (myself included). Try not to give them too much to manipulate (independent variables versus dependent variables, describe interrelations and provide examples). Less can be more in expository writing. (I know that I also implored you to write more. Be very selective and anticipate counter-factual arguments.)
I enjoyed reading your effort. You attempted to track a process through time which is both very difficult and essential to explaining the phenomenon in question. Others failed to even attempt to acknowledge the task properly.
Please use paragraphs to make reading your post easier.