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segue
by Ted Burke

crackers fall from the pack
because you're talking all the time
about the minutes you saved
tossing out a month's worth of
flattened boxes.

Re: segue
by Bratsche

Hey, Ted -

Interesting bit of verse. Dynamic of the tedious gets into proper absurd'sgarb. And the meanderous nature of 'segue' is allowed its own improvs - which, as a fellow musician, you know can only stray so far away from key with out the benefit of geniused intervention to make it work either by way of joy or making good sense - good will do, but fertile sense is preferred, eh?

Have a good one. Best to you and yours. (thanks/glad you liked the 'innocence unsung').

Carpe Verve - from spring water to wherever stringendo may hurl...

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