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lingering
by richard
Well done poem. Good use of imagery. Budding pubscent fantasies. Made me linger over the poem,
Re: lingering
by MaryAnn

He LIKES it! Mikey Richard LIKES it!

Made me linger over the poem

And I hope the lingering made you reminisce about lingerie.

Richard, I also like your use of "pubescent," which I usually see only with a prefix.

Re: lingering
by HAP

Hi all, when I pulled up the poem, I received an error message that I had a malfunction with a Google tool. I did not install the recommended upgrade because the explaining copy was in an Asian language I did not understand. If that Google tool gives me further problems -it had forced me to reboot I.E. - I will have to take further steps. I am curious, are any of you are having problems with any of your Google tools as a result of uploading this poem?

Thanks.

I only read the poem once, but with the help of my Super Duper Slate Poetry Decoder Ring, that I retrieved from a box of Total -my favorite cereal, when combined with some sugar, a banana and some milk -I think I can go out on a limb and assert: there are some thinly veiled references to masturbation in this week’s poem.

Re: lingering
by falcon
A free $14,000 and microfilm copy of the Talmud in every box! And ooh, I detect a thinly veiled reference in your thinly veiled reference.
Re: lingering
by falcon
If you're using windows go get the patches now.
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