Re: You guys are fighting over something that's not the poin
by
hex19
04/03/2009, 11:48 AM #
You wrote: If you think the body of the article was spent on an actual price-comparison of Macs vs. PCs -- and not a discussion of whether marketing based on those comparisons is a wise idea -- then you read something else.
And, uh, if you don't realize that the majority of your article not only discussed the advertising attitudes toward price but also firmly, regularly displayed the author's complete acceptance of those particular advertising attitudes as fact and complete fact, well, you didn't write what you thought you did. In almost every paragraph you seem to buy into the idea that the only thing that PCs have going for them is value, and present as the major problem with the advertising campaign the idea that value will not always be the driving motivator for purchasers. If you don't think that your entire article makes value comparisons and displays a pretty strong bias, well, you have bigger problems as a writer than thinking that "graf" is a cool way to write "paragraph" and not knowing how to format an m-dash.
But maybe I'm just annoyed because your article presents the same stereotype as every other piece about Macs--that people who want style go for Macs. As someone who has looked for style in every $2500+ laptop that I've purchased, I've avoided Macs as kind of clunky and ugly. Buying a Mac is like going to a really expensive restaurant that only has three menu options. Nobody's denying that there's good stuff there, and as long as that very limited, inflexible menu encompasses your desires, well, good for you. But don't imply that the only reason not to go to that restaurant is the price (and you do, in addition to discussing the advertising attitudes). Some of us just don't like French food.