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Bleed
by aimlesswanderer
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Nothing on tv,

Nothing to read.

Think I'll slit my wrists

And watch them bleed.

Re: Bleed
by Clueless
I already made my "Thumbs Down" down vote, but I also have to comment that most writers of bad poems start with the belief that to be truly bad, a poem has to be a sickening whine about a (deservedly) broken heart. There are so many of those examples of dreck out there that it is time to move on to new and fertile ground of meaningless, self-pitying wails over just about nothing. Good job.
Re: Bleed
by aria4567

This reminds me of an old Centimeters song called, "I'm a Big Girl Now."

I'm a big girl now

Nothing left to do but

wait until I die...

Very funny!

Re: Bleed
by lescanlan24
i think this is a horrible poem and it should win the contest!
Re: Bleed
by JannyJinx
how idiotic this whole concept is.
Re: Bleed
by p campbell
This is a call for help. I would have to vote thumbs down for this one
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