Correct me if I'm wrong, but this case seems to have more of the earmarks of a crime syndicate\gang operating under the auspices of a religion, as opposed to a religion operating through a criminal gang. I usually agree with Hitchen's indictments of religious fanatacism, but this example seems to miss the mark, slightly.
Hitchens makes the connection to Sharia law with the YBMB's attacking of liquor stores. Ok, that may have technically been under the auspices of Sharia law, but it seems to me that the real motivations would be much like those that lead to the other accounts of rape\murder\extortion: petty neighborhood thuggery.
You might argue that thuggery is just another form of religious extremism, and that this may as well have been a front for suicide bombers instead of mafiosos. Well there is an important difference - the root cause. Religious extremism as we have become familiar with it grows out of political dissafection and radical ideas of religious justice. Gangsters emerge from broken neighborhoods and lawlessness. This seems to be a case of the latter.
So Hitchens should stick to criticizing the police for acting too late, but instead of blaming it on a laissez-faire approach to religions (which I doubt is as much an impedement as he claims), he should realize that this gang took to long to deal with for the same reasons that hundreds of other criminal organizations in our country still thrive - endemic poverty, dangerous neighborhoods, and the shortcomings of law enforcement.