That's why she's an amateur ;)
by
kittycalbard
10/04/2008, 12:01 AM #
Exactly. There's also one other huge problem with her thought... An English teacher would have read extensively enough to be aware that a truly talented, educated individual can convey their thoughts without resorting to long, convoluted sentences. As one professor I had long ago pointed out, excessively complex structures in writing are often used to make the author look far more educated & intelligent than he or she really is.
One person I knew is a great example... The pretentious jerk had a inferiority complex over not finishing college, so he overused polysyllabic words and quoted Latin phrases he'd memorized whenever possible. As I pointed out to him once, people I knew at any level of education at two of the nation's top-ranking universities were usually concise and kept their everyday communication accessible to anyone. Contrary to the article author's claim, the real indication of intelligence or knowledge was -- and is -- primarily content.