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David Foster Wallace
by Ted Burke

David Foster Wallace wasn't my favorite writer, and I didn't quite "get" the metastatic comedy that was the central work in his short list of books, Infinite Jest, but I did read him often and closely enough in other novels, essays, short stories to see genius, real genius, perhaps the stand alone talent of his generation.He was extremely wordy, prolix was his stock-in-trade, but you kept reading him because he was also brilliantly funny; in this sense Wallace was a true heir of to the late William Gaddis, another genius of long , satirical novels like The Recognitions and JR. Writers like these two are that rare combination of intellectual rigor and approachability; their shared virtuosity was in service to humor, a lessening of the thick clutter that gathers in our waking lives.


At his best, David Foster Wallace is an astute chronicler of the often needless (and fruitless) complications characters create for themselves. In the eight stories that make up his collection Oblivion, he outlines the absurdity, sadness, and sheer comic reality of the outer-edge of consciousness. Fashion magazine editorial boards, consumer research companies, and paranoid office situations are among the areas fictionally explored where human activity fractures into dozens of frantic, nervous tangents. Oblivion is a dizzying, daring set of tales - a riveting virtuoso performance. What was unique about Wallace was that his refusal to be conclusive in his writing, in the sense that a subject ends or a story ends and is finished with when he stops writing. As with a mind that engages life not as framework containing an easily explained and grasped beginning, middle, and end, his prose didn't build to a point to be made, an effect to be had, nor did it perform the artificial dialectic of having it's dualisms come into conflict and produce some unexpected new thing.

Wallace's virtuosity and brilliance at undermining a reader's expectations didn't always justify the lengths went goes to set up his scenes and digressions. Much of what could have been knock out prose simply goes limp at length. There's a numbing lack of emphasis in Infinite Jest and The Broom of the System that reveals what one would call undigested research. The encyclopedism is a habit he gained from Pynchon and DeLillo, I think, but both those writers have a since of scale, and a style that reins in the excess: their sense what makes an antic sprawl is better served by their respective senses of proportion, developed, I think, under the the tutelage and blue pencil of editors who were not afraid to hack away what does not work and instruct in the mending of what does.

Wallace has no such sense of scale, and remains a promising talent, even now; he is less a wunderkind than bright chatterbox who, not finding the right words for an idea, uses all of them. This seems to be the case when first experiencing his prose, and one does discern a method, a purpose and a heart that goes with his profusion --he as much as any writer wanted to test the limits to which writing could embrace it's contradictions and ambivalence as the a counter thesis was instantly presented any discriptive/perscriptive remarks he might offer. He was a "systems novelist" like Pynchon, DeLillo and the late William Gaddis, but Wallace's system who nooks and crevices he inspected, invaded and described in mesmerizingly, excrutiating detail was language itself. His prose seemed the equivilent of actual speech, full of stutters, doubling back, purposeful self-contradiction. Indeed, prose and the sentences that mark its length is an extension of a mind that will not settle in place; his point was the refusal to have a point.

One can defend Wallace's approach as being of a consciousness overwhelmed by media over kill, information glut, what have you, but DeLillo has done that already, with White Noise and especially in Mao ll. Style, an earned sense of economy, matters a great deal here. Wallace, I'd say, is closer to Kerouac, and I fear he may become more like him, as a writer.




Re: David Foster Wallace
by Prytania3

Why does your tense shift?

I am not speaking about your use of the present in the conventional way--when writing about the work rather than the biography. Rather, about the man himself.

Tense
by Ted Burke

Why does your tense shift?

Writing too fast during a lunch hour and not taking the time to proof read my copy. It's nothing so ironic as refusing to regard him as genuinely deceased. Sheer sloppiness is the cause, and thank you for pointing it out.

Re: David Foster Wallace
by pelirrojo viejo


Ted,

I like your expanded critical obit and notice some omissions from your earlier version, hacked away perhaps by that blue pencil. Again I think that you have wonderful way of describing his distinct style. But I do think that you and I differ in the way we think about it in this respect. When you write that, not finding the right words for an idea (he) uses all of them or when you refer to his encyclopedism, you mean to refer to his excesses while I think that, yeah, those are really cool features of Wallace's style.

I really like what you said on the poems fray--but then deleted from this post--about how his sentences seemed to have lives and curiosities of their own, and how, touching everything, their looping syntax and serpatine rhythms could circle their clauses around and rarely lose the central premise.

Ha! Another way you and I differ is in how that bit struck me with its Wallacesque tribute to Wallace, while you probably struck it out as excessive. But now I've taken the blue pencil and, rather than hacking, have grafted it back in. Only now it's footnote. Somehow I think David Foster Wallace would approve.

Re: David Foster Wallace
by Hellzapoppin

I fully agree with your characterization of Wallace as a "promising" writer of overflowing potential. Yes, his style was unmistakeable. Yes, he probably was "the greatest writer of his generation"--but only potentially. He was, undoubtedly, emblematic of his generation, the post- post-whatever people, awash in stimulation, distraction, ungratifying gratification, a couple generations removed from a more historically traditional suffering, but still suffering.

In his "refusal" to reach conclusions, or to engage in "artificial" dialectic constructions, we can maybe see the seeds of his private torment. This tendency mars his fiction with a fatal lack of focus. His brilliant essays have the requisite limits imposed, which is why we are now mostly speaking of those as superior to his fiction. He was clearly ambitious to find the "new" way to express truth in fiction, as this was central to his identity, and he came damn close. He knew what needed to be done--his writing shows this. He couldn't find that structure, or maybe he couldn't find the reason, to synthesize Everything. And so he despaired.

Re: David Foster Wallace
by Bob Gitlin

I agree with Burke except I feel compelled to sound a note on Wallace's behalf the blogger may have missed. It relates to something I heard from DFW himself as I reviewed Charlie Rose's PBS chat after the suicide.

Wallace said he'd intended Infinite Jest to be sad and was disturbed by all the people who said they'd liked it for how zany [my slight, intended paraphrase] it was. I seem to remember a reviewer saying as much -- about its ineffable sadness -- months, perhaps years ago, something I picked up in my manic perusal of anything online (or was it in a magazine?) about this strange, compelling talent. I slogged through Infinite Jest, the whole thing, and found -- as that latter reviewer astutely pointed out -- that the most amazing accomplishment of the ponderous tome was the way in which it showed the utter sadness of violence.

In particular, I remember two scenes. One is pre-reformed thug Gately's tying up and gagging of a wan, dumpy suburban house owner in order to rob his castle, and Wallace's scientific description of what happened to the poor unwatched schlub during his slow death, as he has a cold in his nose and, by the binding of his mouth, finds he cannot breathe. The other takes place when secessionist terrorists (a band of Canadians set on taking over North America?) shove of a broomstick down the gullet of a man clear down to his belly, rupturing everything, a passage ending in a final moment of the victim's soul flying away, which somehow almost brought me to tears.

I regard Wallace as an ingenious chronicler of addiction. His research with Boston AA is exhaustive. I sweated and laughed at once at his description of Erdedy the secluded, porn-addicted pot fiend. Wallace was a true humanist whose ultimate message, delivered using that distinctive "kitchen-sink-included" approach, may be about the subtle violence we do ourselves, as well as that which is perpetrated by nations if not the whole damn world. He was a riot; and he was almost unbearably poignant.

He will be missed.

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