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Fibonacci poetry
by MaryAnn
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Adapted from other sources --

A Fibonacci is an experimental poetry form similar to haiku but based instead on the Fibonacci sequence (named after a medieval mathematician). The number of syllables in each line of the poem is the sum of the previous two lines – 1, 1, 2, 3, 5, 8, 13, 21, 34….

The typical fib is a six-line, 20-syllable poem with a syllable count by line of 1/1/2/3/5/8. Here’s an example, composed by Gregory K Pincus, creator of the modern Fib poem –

Small,
Precise,
Poetic,
Spiraling mixture:
Math plus poetry yields the Fib.

Pincus, a Los Angeles writer, came up with Fibs while pondering a haiku-writing exercise. A confessed math geek, he sought a form that offered added precision and was intrigued by Fibonacci numbers. In nature, the sequence is evident in the spirals of nautilus shells, waves, pinecones, and sunflower seeds, to name a few. Pincus played with the number sequence for his own amusement, creating one of his favorite Fibs:

FIB TIME by Gregory K Pincus

Tell
Fibs.
What time?
Every day
Two seconds before
Clocks hit 11:24.

Pincus likes Fibs because, “The constrained form makes you very conscious of word choice.” “I don’t know that there was any other attraction other than I thought that it was a neat sequence,” says Pincus. “It was different. A seemingly odd combination of mathematical sequence and poetry that really works.” It is not difficult, he says, to come up with a 20-syllable line that fits the Fibonacci structure. The hard part is to come up with a 20-syllable line that reads well.

Fibonacci poetry is not new. It’s been around in one form or another for centuries, with works applying the numerical sequence to syllables, words, or letters. What makes Fibs remarkable is how quickly they spread, thanks to the Internet. Poet Alan Reynolds posted his take on Fibs in Fib format --

This (1)
form (1)
forces (2)
fine feelings (3)
into abstruse lines (5)
each longer longing to affix (8)
a meaning to creations made live by febrile minds (13)
and for this trick I thank both you and SlashDot. Well done.
Though if continued cumbersome. (21)

Blogger Marilyn Roberts announced a contest for knitting-related Fibs on her site with the following Fib:

FIB TO A KNIT DWEEB by Marilyn Roberts

I
spend
my days
wondering
if Lion Brand Fun Fur
will make a nice pair of undies.

Fibs are so appealing because these short, straightforward poems are that rare thing capable of crafting a bridge between the often disparate souls of art and science. It helps that the form is exceptionally easy for anyone to understand. Pincus reports that he’s received several e-mail messages from teachers reporting that Fibs are a great way to combine math and English, and to explain the Fibonacci sequence to the non-mathematically inclined.

The simplicity of the form is part of its appeal, says Tony Barnstone, poet and professor of English language and literature at Southern California’s Whittier College (home of the Whittier College Poets, named by USA Today as the least threatening college mascot in America, topping even the Mary Baldwin College Squirrels and the New York University Violets).

The phenomenon of ordinary folks, as opposed to professional poets, experimenting with poetry is widespread and timeless. As examples, Barnstone points to the oral poetry tradition in modern Greece, exemplified by the Cretan mantinades (morning songs), an oral poetry form used in music and courtship, and the popularity of tanka and hokku (haiku) in Japan.

“Perhaps one could compare the spread of the Fib to the spread of the sonnet in England after its introduction to English by Henry Howard, Earl of Surrey, and by Thomas Wyatt, or to the sonnet sequence fad that Sir Philip Sidney began, or to the spread of renga under the influence of Basho,” says Barnstone. “In cultures such as China and Japan, poetry was central to the life of the people, and so a widespread popularity of particular verse forms was common in many periods.”

Of course, the swift rush of Internet celebrity is accompanied by an equally speedy fall into fustiness. Although they’re not even two years old, Fibs are ancient news online. But they continue popping up on sites here and there.

Pincus is one of those who continue writing them, and in fact is working on a novel that includes Fibs. He hopes that the little poems continue to proliferate. “Fibs are good clean fun, and playing with form, any form, that inspires people to write, is good,” says Pincus.

DUNK! by Gregory K Pincus

Slam!
Dunk!
Soaring . . .
I'm scoring.
Crowd keeps on roaring.
In my dreams I'm unstoppable.

Re: Fibonacci poetry
by islandtime

Help
me,
I'm sick.
Poetic
form's what makes me tick.
This Fibonacci spiral is
elegant, addicting ... it might be something viral!

Re: Fibonacci poetry
by NuPlanetOne

Forever Now

I
Love
You now
But will I
Love you tomorrow?
But if you should fail to love me
Then it is forever now from time we must borrow.

Re: Fibonacci poetry
by waltz and capsize

stroke
of
luck? mom,
what gives? we
liked to think you leapt
tall buildings in a single bound.
instead Dave found you paralyzed. face up. on the ground.

Re: Fibonacci poetry
by Eljem
The Point

A
Point
In Space
Is an empty place,
Fit only for an argument.

Re: Fibonacci poetry
by HAP

MA: (home of the Whittier College Poets, named by USA Today as the least threatening college mascot in America, topping even the Mary Baldwin College Squirrels and the New York University Violets).

I beg to differ: The UC Santa Cruz Banana Slugs. (Well maybe with Poets neck in neck). And a shout out to mothermayi: I saw your post on this week’s poem and I am in agreement, sometimes a banana is just a banana (Thanks Woody).

To: Gregory K Pincus, creator of the modern Fib poem and to Waltz…

Binary ConFusion

By HP

Ten

10?

10

10 what?

10… you know what!

Just what are you talking about?

10: that is exactly what I am talking about!

How many times have Abbot and Costello pulled me through…? (and, as the joke goes, if you get this the first time around, chances are you are not getting laid).

Re: Fibonacci poetry
by HAP

Do not even dare to open this link until you have read the above posted post. If it confuses you, congratulations on your healthy sex life: Tree of Knowledge

Re: Fibonacci poetry
by White_Rabbit

I
wear
a shirt
bearing phi
(symbol and digits)
to express my delight in the
Golden Ratio, Rectangle, Spiral, and Cut. ThinkGeek.

wr ()()

Sometimes a banana is just the beginning...
by White_Rabbit

...and I am in agreement, sometimes a banana is just a banana...

And sometimes it's just the beginning of a banana split. :)

Give Mr. Pinsky some credit: whatever the quality of what he sends us, consistently it's meant to say more than appears on the surface. You may be certain that last Tuesday's Poem was meant to be no exception.

wr ()()

Re: Fibonacci poetry
by Vergilius

Consequence
Of
Mathematical
Form
Pi symbolizes
A relationship expressed about
Circles.
Questionable constraints
Govern poetry.

Re: Fibonacci poetry
by HAP

Poetry

Governs

Questionable restraints

Circles about an

Expressed relationship

Symbols form pi

And inform

Mathematical consequences

Re: Fibonacci poetry
by HAP
Hey, V: Not! You are correct.
Re: Fibonacci poetry
by Vergilius

Euler's
Multiple contributions
Shine
Widely
In mathematical circles
But
Guidance contributed by "e,"
Beyond
Bounds of natural consequence,
Rests
Weak in the realm of poetry.

Re: Fibonacci poetry
by HAP

A

B

CD

EFG

HIJK and

L’emNOP-QRS

TUVWXYZ, now I know ABCs

(When bested...resort to shtick).

Re: Fibonacci poetry
by waltz and capsize

ah, HAP,

there are 10 kinds of people in the world. and i guess i'm both of them.

binary, yup, a little. enough.
laid? that's how we got our 1010 kids (that's one zero one zero.) you're OK with numbers but bad at math, HAP.

one
is
the lone-
liest num
ber that you ever

knew.

thanks for the Abbot and Costello.

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