First, I appreciate the feedback. On the whole, even the hate mail
from Slate readers is more thoughtful than the typical hate mail I got
at Gawker or DealBreaker, which was invariably, no matter what the
topic, "O YEH, WELL, UR A BIG SLUT!!" For those of you who agree with
me, I don't have anything to add.
For those who don't, and who
seem to exist in startlingly greater proportions in the Fray than in my
inbox, a few clarifications:
- To be clear, I am smug(ish) about
my initial assessment of the airline (and even then, only in a
tongue-in-cheek fashion, which is to say, not in any serious sense), my
experience with which was much worse than the small bit I recounted
here. I am not smug about the deaths of 200 people. Only a sociopath
would be, whatever the reason. It might have been bad syntax on my
part, but the notion that I'm gleefully celebrating a horrible disaster
is absurd on the face of it.
- My primary contention that
TAM's ineptitude is a product of Brazil's infrastructure deficiencies
is not a uniquely minority or uniquely American viewpoint. The first
people to point to the infrastructure problems when we were there were
friends who live in Rio and Sao Paulo and have had trouble traveling
domestically. If you're just flying in and out of one city
internationally, it's less of a problem. If you want to fly from one
Brazilian city to another, particularly over spotty parts of the
Amazon, it's more difficult. If you read the Brazilian press, you'll
note that these problems are widely and heavily discussed, and that
Brazilians by and large are not happy with the Luis government's
complacency. (As to the bizarre but most amusing assertion here that I
gratuitously inserted my boyfriend, just to demonstrate that I have
one--though I'll admit I find that fact just as surprising as you do--
i did so because as I specifically mentioned, he's travel writer, and
he's logged more international flight hours than even the most frequent
business travelers I know, often in war-torn areas where the pilots of
national carriers brag about the number of crashes they've survived. So
I consider him a fair and credible judge of what constitutes a truly
ridiculous air travel experience. He was more incensed than I was, and
since nationality seems to matter in terms of credibility of one's
criticism here, he's not American. But to the person who complained
about it, I shall dutifully refer to him impersonally and asexually as
"my traveling companion" if it comes up again, lest anyone be offended
by the notion that I have personal relationships.) As for the poster who's insinuating that this article wouldn't have been posted were it about American airlines: are you kidding? That would have been even better. I never insinuated that American carriers were anything less than horrendous. The difference is that American domestic travelers don't have to worry about military radar systems failing en route to LA (or wherever.) And when there are problems with national infrastructure, it doesn't generally affect *every single airport in the country*.
- re: my
personal experience vs. the larger story - if I were to rewrite the
piece, I'd move the last four paragraphs to the front, as people seem
to be overly focused on the couple of paragraphs about my TAM
experiences (which were consistent over 6 flights and three domestic
airports, not just Sao Paulo) and maybe cut them entirely. But I'm
surprised that's the case, as i only used them to illustrate what's
happening on the ground in a concrete fashion and didn't think they
were that provocative. If that were the entire point of the piece,
there are plenty of outlets for me to talk about a bad travel
experience without bringing Wednesday's accident, Brazilian
infrastructure problems, etc., into it at all. In fact, it would be
easier to do so. But I think the larger problems are serious and
sometimes talking about the symptoms is the best way to get people
interested in the disease. I suppose we could have titled the piece Why
Militarized Air Traffic Control in Brazil is a Bad Thing and How It
Affects National Carriers, but it's more relevant to the average
frequent flyer to talk about why specific domestic air travel in Brazil
is infuriating and then examine potential underlying causes.
-
As to whether the timing of the piece was insensitive--the "too soon"
argument--if I had a friend or relative involved in the crash, the
FIRST thing I would want on the public's agenda is some debate about
why the accident happened and whether it could have been prevented, if
only so that it doesn't happen again. The Brazilian press hasn't
refrained from talking about it. The victims' families haven't
refrained from talking about it. I don't think we should, either. So
I'm not inclined to spend the piece talking about how horrible the
accident was, because that's self-evident and indisputable. No one
needs me--or anyone--to tell them that what happened was a tragedy and
that it was unspeakably painful for the friends and families of the
victims. Everyone understands that.
- it has been suggested
that as a "moneybox" piece, the article would have been better served
by more economic analysis, stats, etc. I think that's a valid point.
But i didn't think of it as a business piece when I pitched it. That
said, if I were going to do it again, I'd include those things, because
even if it's not a business piece, it doesn't hurt my argument.
-
RE: the use of WORST in the headline. - This is obviously subjective
and hyperbolic, as the declaration of "worst" things. And arguably,
it's not what the article is really about, given the conclusion. Does
TAM have the worst safety record? No. But there are several factors
that can make for a bad airline experience, and that's just one of
them. There are also differing opinions on what constitutes a bad
experience. It's my personal opinion, which brings me to the following:
- As to prevalence of opinion in the piece - Slate is a
magazine of commentary. This means that not only am I allowed to have
opinions (however wrongheaded they may possibly seem to some of you),
I'm encouraged to have them, and in fact, required to have them.
Horrifying, I know, but there it is. And you are encouraged to disagree
with me, which I don't mind or I wouldn't have put my opinion in a
public forum in the first place. To the person who reprinted my
already-very-public-email-which-I-put-on-my-very-public-webs
ite-myself-so that-people-could-use-it: thanks. I know from your tone
that you meant it as an incitement for people to barrage me with hate
mail, but my byline is on the piece for a reason and I welcome any
rebuttals, particularly if they address my actual argument and show me
some evidence that TAM is in fact a quite good airline and that
Brazilian infrastructure is adequate, an argument I am willing to
entertain. I would like to believe it is, but I don't think it's the
case and my experience doesn't bear that out either. For anyone who
missed it the first time, you can reach me at espiers AT earthlink DOT
net. Ignore the spam filter. I check that folder regularly and pick out
the real emails from the offers to enlarge my penis.
- Elizabeth Spiers (espiers AT earthlink DOT net)