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"The Mole's Complaint"
by Zeus-Boy
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"The Mole's Complaint"

"Why am I down this dark hole?"
said the blind mole to the grub.
"Because it's your dark hole,"
said the deferential grub.
"Then what are you doing here?"
asked the discontented mole.
"O I just dug by to dig you, dude,"
Replied the grubby little troll.

"I want to be a prairie dog,"
moaned the blind mole to the worm.
"You'll always be a dog to me,"
said the worm with a little squirm.
"I want to see and run as free,"
scowled the petulant slow mole.
"Well, I wanted to be a bee,"
but see what happened to me."

"This is a dark and miserable life,"
droned the blind mole to the root.
"Tell me about it, Hon,"
said the exasperated root.
"I wish I were fruit falling from a tree,"
mused the mole as if he could see.
"What's fruit?" asked the root, "And what's a tree?
And is it dark down here, or is it just me?"

"I want to be a gazelle, an eagle,"
wept the blind mole to the grave.
But the grave did not answer.
"Fine. Be like that," shrugged the mole,
"See if I care." But then he cursed
the silent grave: "May my words be
a spade, and may they dig your grave
forever in the cemetery of my heart."

Re: "The Mole's Complaint"
by theNairobiTrio

Edward Lear + Edward Gorey.

Works for me - engrossing and perturbing.

Anway, are you limbering up your "neo-formalist" side for your debut? If so, I'm sure you'll do very well. This is a piece of quasi-formal verse in which some originality actually inheres.

Re: "The Mole's Complaint"
by greeneggsnham
Wow, you gave him a pat on the back and almost didn't use the back of your hand to accomplish it.
Re: "The Mole's Complaint"
by theNairobiTrio

What do you mean "almost"?

There was no hidden slam there.

Re: "The Mole's Complaint"
by FieldingBandolier

If the mole were able to make peace with his essential moleness, might it free him up to find satisfaction, even if not the ideal he'd imagined? You've described what constitutes damnation, in my consideration.

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very nice
by zuko

good read,

thanks

z

Your poetry...
by Archaeopteryx
Always a delight for a biologist (even when it's not the cheeriest).
Re: Is Biology Destiny?
by Zeus-Boy
Asked the Mole of his genitals ... [Oops, another stanza coming on].
Do moles have psychologists?
by Archaeopteryx

Or surgeons? Or faulty wiring?

Re: "The Mole's Complaint"
by Schmutzie

"And is it dark down here, or is it me?"

Oh it's dark.

Thanks for a great read, as always.

(Ahhh but what do I know from poetry?)

Gotta Keep The Mole
by Zeus-Boy
Down in his hole.
Re: Gotta Keep The Mole
by Schmutzie

Wow. Thank you.

Never saw that one before. He's a bit more animated than usual huh? Holy holy holy shit.

Can I get an amen?

Won't Someone Give Me A Hallelujah.
by Zeus-Boy
Praise the Lord.
Re: Won't Someone Give Me A Hallelujah.
by Schmutzie

And Jeeeeeeezus smiled.

Big news, did you catch the press conference?

Yea.
by Zeus-Boy

He's playing a small venue in the Phoenix Park, for three nights. The tickets sold out immediately after they came out, so by the time I could get round to it they were gone.

In order to eliminate scalpers Waits required every buyer to produce a passport ID's with their cc. None can enter unless the ticket matches the buyer's name. Bummer for those who thought they might get a spare on eBay.

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