Re: Semicolon use is confusing
by
EarlyBird
06/23/2008, 2:21 PM #
I've learned it this way:
There are times when you want to put together two sentences because they are so closely linked and supportive of one another. By separating them into two distinct sentences they would lose the impact you're going after.
But never simply put two complete sentences together with a comma, known as a "comma splice," which is grammatically incorrect.
Here's an example:
Bob did not want to go into the woods. He was afraid of bears.
There is nothing wrong with the above at all. But using a semi-colon to join them may be a bit more supportive:
Bob did not want to go into the woods; he was afraid of bears.
With the semi-colon Bob's fear of bears is immediately linked to his not wanting to go into the woods.
You could also use a full colon after "woods," but it might be a bit more dramatic than you are going for, thusly:
Bob did not want to go into the woods: he was afraid of bears.
You can also use the semi-colon to string together a number of phrases as in a list, like this:
The Forest Service works to prevent forest fires; patrols campgrounds to keep campers safe; keeps an eye on the weather and; manages soil erosion.
Again, you could use a comma where the semi-colon is being used in the above sentence, but the semi-colon aides the reader in breaking them up into more distinct phrases
Here's the above sentence using commas:
The Forest Service works to prevent forest fires, patrols campgrounds to keep campers safe, keeps an eye on the weather and manages soil erosion.
As a reader I prefer the use of semi-colons.