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A Ditty for Ducadmo
by Zeus-Boy
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Just to show there's no hard feelings. Some thought your "tour de force" captured the essence of my anonymn. I thought it way wide of the mark, and felt that I owed you an apology. I find I cannot participate any longer in the 'he said, she said' turn-n-turn-about which is Fray political discourse these days. The primary seems an internal matter which doesn't really concern us out here on the fringes of the empire, unless [as Zizek said] only non-nationals should be allowed to vote. Goodbye, friends.

Tristium

Books and bread won't save the dead
and names will never wound them,
for they've gone home through the soggy loam
dragging their tales behind them.

No bragging rights in the tight
and narrow, so pull yourself together,
that's right, chin up, breast out,
shoulders square as a tapered arse —
The Requiem's a total farce,
the mass is crude and crass,
so pass your gas beneath the grass,
and wrest a sleep from ashen deep.
Do you not see daisies in the shade?
Or the chains the children made?
There's a link in there just for you,
and a woven ring-a-rosie too,
so, c'mon, smile up at the happy day
before their laughter fades away.

A sickness groans inside my bones
and words have always failed me,
and now I find I've lost my mind
where none know where to find me.

brilliant.
by Snolly G
i think i'll crack my window to let in some fresh air.
Re: A Ditty for Ducadmo
by ohforgodssake
whaaaaaaaat????
No need to run off.
by Archaeopteryx
hey
by Isonomist
you know where to find me, at any rate. I'm there.
Look pal
by ducadmo

I couldn't have been too far off the mark if I touched a nerve, n'est pas? That said, I meant no offense. Indeed, I was my intention simply to amuse you.

As you are arguably the best writer here, it would be a shame - and a loss to us all if you did not grace this forum from thyme to time with the spice of your wit. I share your intolerance for the dreariness of the political campaign rhetoric. Some require primary motivation, but like so much gas, it will pass.

If I did offend, I do sincerely apologize.

this is superior stuff
by daveto
glad I was around to catch it.
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by Grady N. Fleischmann
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