MA wrote: Am desperately trying to figure out how to get out of that mode.

i repeat my musings: i do wonder, though if PoemsFray is not too consistent with the rest of Slate in that the editorial mission seems to be "before all else, wag the dog, then yank its chain."

can we get better poems? i am suspicious.

can we make better critique? i know i've read some well-done and much-varried critique on PF. i'd like to see more of it.

waltz