I LIKE that poem, denny.

I really think you should focus on original poetry revolving around such themes. If (as Sir Arthur Eddington said) "the Universe is not only queerer than we imagine, it's queerer than we can imagine," then surely there is a place for your slightly askew perspective in trying to imagine it poetically. And this is surely a good place to start. Certainly it's better than trying to imitate us NFs especially at our own emotive, psychodramatic game.

LOL, indeed...

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