I think we also need to accept that every poem written need not be a "master work". If that were the criteria - then no one would post their poetry on Poems Fray.

Trying to have it both ways--first you ask for critical comments, and then you want us to go easy, since "every poem here need not be a 'master work'". At this point you should stop trying to be such a weasle and just accept the comments you've gotten and finally be quiet.