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Re: Thursday OPP: "Hot" by Craig Arnold
by Angel

While I delighted in your own rimey-dimey, uber-delicious send-ups of those who cobble together malformed poems, I like Arnold's unrimed verse far better.

Here, the rime gets in the way of the sensual images that he does so brilliantly.

Thanks for this, though, Cutter. It does work quite well with the weather, which is blistering here. I'm headed back to read your latest "rules" now!

Angel

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