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Up with which I shall not put
by sjalterego

Not to be a pedantic prescriptivist because I know the rule about ending a sentence with a preposition is not really a rule or always necessary. However, the title of this piece:

Remembering the genius whom Stanley Kubrick stole music from

s truly god-awful. Why not simply have written the much easier to understand and more obvious sentence "Remembering the genius from whom Stanly Kubrick stole music"?

Re: Up with which I shall not put
by ayalonValley

>>Why not simply have written the much easier to understand and more obvious sentence

because if you want to be a successful art critic you need to be able to garble and juggle your text until it becomes too cumbersome to read, thus proving you are enlightened

Re: Up with which I shall not put
by hellifiknow
If that's cumbersome to you, you're in trouble. Besides, Slate insists upon using the proper "whom," rather than the far-more-common, though improper in this case, "who." Clearly grammarian chops are important, so what's the excuse?
Re: Up with which I shall not put
by ayalonValley

who exactly was suggesting "who" instead of "whom"? top-poster was (justly) asking for a a clearer sentence, my point was, clarity is something art critics seem to avoid.

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